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Please list 10 ways you can improve your essay scores

1. use better and more effective qoutes                          6. restate my thesis
2. better effective thesis statement                                  7. better and more detailed ending statement
3. better expression of maint point for each paragraph    8. double check my grammar
4.effective illustrations                                                    9. make sure i use the right voice style
5. explain more in detail                                                10. and better punctuation and mechanics


Please write any 15 thoughts about the book Slaughterhouse-5.  For each thought, please refer to a specific part of the book that generated this thought (for instance, “It was funny” receives no credit; “It was funny when he described the Tralfamadorians” receives full credit).

1.it was hillarious when he said that he was abducted

2. it was beyond astonishing to see that tralfamadorians had no emotions even if they knew when they were going to die.

3. i was amazed by how extra terrestrials knew about when the world was gonna die

4. i was skeptical when i read that the tralfamdorians knew about the 4th dimension

5.it was hillarious when billy was decribing his wife being fat.

6. i really liked when they asked to keep the three musketeers together caused that showed loyalty even in war.

7.i really disliked how he his wife died and that didn't bother him at all 

8.i also didn't like when he knew about his own death but had no emotions toward it like come on who isn't scared of death

9.i really liked i when he was arguing with his daughter but when she asked him where did you get this from b/c you never mentioned it before the airplane crash and he responded and said that the time wasn't ripe for him to say back than 

10. i thought it was amazing that Roland weary had the first dirty photograph that most definitely made my day 

11. i enjoyed the part were billy went back in time to the y.m.c.a. where his father was going to use the sink or swim technique to teach billy how to swim 

12.i admired the tralfamdorians said that the earthlings should try hard to ignore the awful times and concentrate on the good ones

13.i disagree when the tralfamdorians say that they can't prevent the end of universe 

14.i thought it was funny when montana wildhack screamed when she first saw the tralfamdorians 

15.i also thought it was hillarious when billy slept with montana and said it was heavenly 


State 5 possible themes for the book Slaughterhouse-5.
1.you do what you because you must and not on your own free will

2.life is human being which is only to be enjoyed with the unknowns 

3.life goes on after death 

4.deaths come and go but your life lives on 

5. ignoring wars is impossible when you have free will 


Write a conversation between yourself and Billy Pilgrim in which he tries to teach you a lesson based on his own experiences.  You must explain IN DEPTH at least 3 specific events and details from the book in order to receive full credit.  This conversation should go on as long as it takes to demonstrate YOUR UNDERSTANDING of Billy’s experiences.
EXAMPLE:
Billy: Hello, Mr. Cheng
Mr. Cheng: Hi Billy
Billy: Have you heard about Tralfamadore?
Mr. Cheng: No, what’s that?
Billy: It’s a planet where they... etc.